Part One ~ Marisol
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Marisol didn’t recognize herself anymore—not in the mirror, not in the quiet spaces between breaths. She had learned to move through life on instinct alone, doing what was required, surviving what was handed to her. That Sunday morning, she buttoned her coat, smoothed her hair, and kissed her daughter’s forehead before heading into church, trusting that for once, things would be handled without her.
Evan had their daughter, Lily. He’d said he had “something important” to do—an audition, apparently—but he hadn’t mentioned the overnight stay, the hotel attached to the venue, or the woman he’d been seeing on the side. Marisol didn’t know any of that yet. All she knew was that Lily waved goodbye with a smile too big for a six-year-old who had already learned how to pretend everything was fine.
Hours passed. The church emptied. The sun dipped low and disappeared entirely. Marisol’s phone sat silent on the kitchen counter like a bad omen.
At 4:12 a.m., it rang.
A woman’s voice—tight, concerned—asked if she was Lily’s mother. They’d found her daughter asleep on a couch in the waiting area of an audition hall, curled around her backpack like a lifeline. Lily, brave and small, had told them she knew her mama’s number by heart.
Marisol didn’t remember the drive. Just red lights bleeding into green, her hands shaking on the steering wheel, her chest burning with every breath she forced in. When she arrived, Lily was already awake, eyes wide but dry—too dry. The moment Marisol saw her, she dropped to her knees and wrapped her arms around her daughter, holding on like the world might try to take her again.
“I waited,” Lily whispered. “Daddy said he’d be right back.”

Anger settled into Marisol’s bones—cold, heavy, precise. She asked the staff one question: What room is he in?
The elevator ride was silent. The hallway smelled like stale perfume and bad decisions. Marisol didn’t knock; she pounded. Again. Again. The door finally cracked open, and a woman with smeared makeup and confusion clouding her face stood in the way.
Marisol pushed past her.
Evan was sprawled across the bed, unmoving, his body slack in a way that told the truth before his eyes ever opened. The room was chaos—empty bottles, scattered clothes, the sharp, unmistakable weight of something darker hanging in the air.
Marisol struck him once—hard enough to wake him, not hard enough to satisfy the fury roaring through her. He jolted upright, eyes wild, pupils blown wide. In that moment, she knew. She didn’t need proof.
Her voice filled the room—raw, shaking, unleashed. Every fear she’d swallowed, every excuse she’d made for him, every night she’d chosen silence over confrontation spilled out all at once. Lily stood behind her, small hands gripping the doorframe, watching her mother become something fierce.
Marisol didn’t stay to hear his excuses.
She took Lily’s hand and walked out, the hallway swallowing them whole. As the elevator doors closed, Lily leaned into her side, safe again—for now.
Marisol knew one thing as the doors opened to the empty night: some things break so completely they can never be repaired. And sometimes, that’s not the tragedy.
Sometimes, that’s the beginning.
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